the amorous nature

Monday, January 4, 2010
The wind took away the words,
leaving a lisp,
for me to work out from her lips.
her eyes close to mine veiled the sea,
the sun sinking to hide the bare shores,
the silken claws of night breached the deeps,
the waves slitting down the pensive heaves,
shrubs flowered in the nocturne,
drunk with a sensuous cologne,
clouds cloaked a meddling moon.
words this time clung like a moan,
making the roar of the raging sea,to drown.
the hills closed in,
and the skies fell over our remnants,
with a few shells on the rim.


Gerry Boyd said...

This is rich and lush. Enjoyed very much. Thanks.

Stan Ski said...

The view from my window!

Linda Jacobs said...

Delightful descriptions!

Srikumaran Madhava Menon said...

Deep and meaningful words springing out from the heart...great writing.....

R@J said...

could visualize the whole scenario crystal clear. well described & excellent writing...thanx

AnAestheticBard said...

Thank all of you for the compliments.

Sadia Hussain said...

As always beautifully written! I deeply admire your talent to etch your thoughts so brilliantly!
Take care Shashi and wish you a great New Year.

matt at shadow of iris said...

I feel as if I were there, thank you.

oliviasmindlymatters said...

Few shells on the rim..
Nice ending on a both positive and negative note..
Positive for the shell- collectors, sad for the shells.. having departed from their homes..

Eileen T O'Neill ..... said...

This is one of the most sensuous and beautiful poems, that I have ever read.

Best wishes, Eileen:)

Judy Roney said...

Wow! I was going to choose a line that struck me but I chose each line. You have a way with words!

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